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Deep Bonding

Deep Bonding

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

Deep bonding your icy heat of desire as you arrest me up against cool tap waters.

Erecting your lips of dehydration up against drinking my lips of lemon lime thirst as our hearts beat of querulous entwine.

Erode me to this desire as I have been yearning for you to feed my screaming of hunger for you to

Penetrate me in this bay.

 

 

Bonding me in this love of silence why do you make me crazy for you this way.

Open minded to you and the nature relaxing me I get nervous and shackled at my knees.

Never for get how much I love you and the way you can open me.

Delicious of strawberry fruit juices as we kiss and our hearts skipping beats as we jump rope.

Icing on my cake as you push hard steel in me and make my walls scream and belch. It’s

Not what I expected my mind went speeding fast then my storms couldn’t reject it. You

Going inside of me lightning fires to my private water streams.

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Julia L. Clark

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

Author notes

This is art inspired this look so sexy I believe so the way he has her arrested up against the rocks and quenching his thirst of lips through her saliva of waters is sexy i love this type of drive ~ jewels ~

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  • Galaxy2
    June 19

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    'Icing on my cake as you push hard steel in me and make my walls scream and belch.'
    It makes me curios to touch your walls, honey!

    You're so full of life....
    You deserve kisses as hot as hell, cutie!
    Everything about you is so beautiful!

    Galaxy2

  • Da-Lyricologist
    June 4

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    Wow... awestruct

    you know you have the gift... Like the writer of those Zane novels... your words are so powerful and vivid that you could get a brother sprung... LOL

  • SexyBooty
    May 21

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    good

    I like this poem girl get it coming I can tell you is not lonely by the way you write some one is keeping you happly


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      May 21
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      lol writing hon has a many of emotions its funny that you say that all writers have a many different personalities its a part of the game and what we feed off of to provide the reading desire thanks hon

  • Galaxy2
    May 7
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    'Delicious of strawberry fruit juices as we kiss and our hearts skipping beats as we jump rope'....
    Wow!...that's so skilfully descriptive....

    'Icing on my cake as you push hard steel in me and make my walls scream and belch'...
    how communicative, my love!

    '.............You
    Going inside of me lightning free to my private water streams'....
    Oh...how I want to watch thse water streams!

    What an erotica!
    Let me kiss you all over, honey!
    You're all sweet...
    all honey!

    Galaxy2

  • Galaxy2
    May 7
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    'Delicious of strawberry fruit juices as we kiss and our hearts skipping beats as we jump rope'....
    Wow!...that's so skilfully descriptive....

    'Icing on my cake as you push hard steel in me and make my walls scream and belch'...
    how communicative, my love!

    '.............You
    Going inside of me lightning free to my private water streams'....
    Oh...how I want to watch thse water streams!

    What an erotica!
    Let me kiss you all over, honey!
    You're all sweet...
    all honey!

    Galaxy2


  • CarnalNineTailedFox
    November 25, 2007

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    Erecting your lips of dehydration up against drinking my lips of lemon lime thirst as our hearts beat of querulous entwine.
    Erode me to this desire as I have been yearning for
    you to feed my screaming of hunger for you to
    Penetrate me in this bay.

    Very descriptive! Love your use of imagery!
    ~Dommi

  • Xyku
    September 16, 2007

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    Wonderful work of art. The words you used to describe each detail was exquisite. And the picture was very sexy, with a sense of realism, yet calming fantasy.

    As another said, "Erecting your lips of dehydration up against drinking my lips of lemon lime thirst as our hearts beat of querulous entwine.

    Erode me to this desire as I have been yearning for you to feed my screaming of hunger for you to

    Penetrate me in this bay."

    Gives such a powerful imagery. Wonderful poem

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  • Da-Lyricologist
    August 22, 2007
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    you rock

    wow... i love your wording it so descriptive. I like the way you express your self with those big words of yours i had to look some of them up.you should write a novel... i would be the first to buy it.... 1 luv

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  • ellipsist
    August 14, 2007

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    you taught me a new word

    querulous... nice... anyway, yes, very sexy picture and that is quite a sexy interpretation of it... very very well done... so many great combination of words:

    "Deep bonding your icy heat of desire as you arrest me up against cool tap waters.

    Erecting your lips of dehydration up against drinking my lips of lemon lime thirst as our hearts beat of querulous entwine.

    Erode me to this desire as I have been yearning for you to feed my screaming of hunger"

    awesome imagery!

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  • Blaque01
    August 10, 2007
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    Oh lawd....lol...


  • kennethlaney
    August 1, 2007
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    Very Good Poem

    Goes well with the picture baby,
    "BOO"


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      August 1, 2007
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      thanks babe i like it also hell i have a few that i personally can say is my favorite and this is one of them i may add it to the red book of love book

  • Brazos silver member
    July 31, 2007

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    Deeeeeeeeeep Bonding

    Love builds in the waterfall...streaming waters of love and desire. The coolness of the water only lends to the heat of the bodies...warm, inviting, crashing against the rocks. Then the hot waters begin to flow...

    Nice write Julia, I loved it. I wish it had been you and me in that cascade.

    I love you,
    Brazos

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  • AngelicSinz
    July 31, 2007
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    well done llady ireally liked this one!


  • Griswold
    July 31, 2007

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    Beautifully done Julia, i loves this write, short and sweet and to the point, you are amazing.. ...Scott

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  • darell silver member
    July 31, 2007

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    Awesome Love!

    Julia this is breathtakingly beautiful.
    In fact its one of your best yet as far as
    I'm concerned. I really loved the images you
    painted with your brush strokes of love.
    Your words complimented the photo to perfection.
    I adore the talent that is you.
    You have so many dimensions that are yet
    to be revealed. I hope to experience them
    all with you. I am in love..

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  • patsoldcat
    July 31, 2007

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    sensational

    love this write so hot and wet (yes humor)
    great write to that pic, will be sending you a response piece soon.

    fantastic feeling and images were here giving me such a rush.

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