The lovers soar in their bliss,
Cool and gentle like the summer's breeze,
Full of hope and life they kiss,
Their heart beats drum with ease.
Here are two people meant to be.
They walk together hand in hand,
Exploring space and time and beyond,
Searching together every land,
Hovering side by side with the aid of the Angel's wand.
They can't be stopped by even the deepest sea.
The heavenly lovers met on that special day,
When they were blessed with true love.
They were shown through the star-lit way,
Led by a glooming dove sent from the Creator above.
Tied together, they exist in glee.
A contest entry
- Experimenting with Rhyme and Form by Zephyr Aryn.
630 points, ended August 2, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This love sounds heavenly. Really.
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this is just so romantically beautiful....I almost cried. bravo
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Wonderful!!!
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Beautiful, very touching. Not the general style I read (mine turn dark by the end) but I'm inspired by this tale of love without an end. Wonderful, "blessed with true love" indeed, it is a blessing to find the one.
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very nice poem. I have fallen out of love so I am unable to emotionally connect to it, but I can see its a good poem. Keep up the good work,
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Very good!
This is a very romantic poem! I like the way that it is written and the length of each stanza. the flow of the poem is nice and it presents a nice image.
Keep up the good work!
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nice rhyming ^-^ although I'm not quite sure what you mean to say by "glee" it seems to me that one word doesn't quite fit with the rest of your poem but perhaps you're trying to startle the reader
either way good job with the poem
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This write is pretty good. The last line sounds a little cheesy, although I know you used it for the rhyme. Good job with keeping to the form, though!
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Good job Tender, like the rhyme scheme. Accurate discreption of subject matter. Keep it up!!!
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