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Gardenia

White gardenias
Nestled in glossy green leaves
Exotic perfume.

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Written September 4th, 2003

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  • poetryality silver member
    September 5, 2003
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    Wonderous Aroma!

    Beautiful! I can see the "gardenia" and smell it. It also reminds me of Billie Holiday, she really made the gardina a flower of fame. Thanks for the pleasent flower this morning. You always bring me flowers...


    Haikus are flowers
    Written in the early morn'
    Flowers that sing songs

    Much Love,
    Renee