We met again in the same familiar place
Glaring at me with temptation
Her caramel color was just so tempting
My adulteress rendezvous began again
I paid for her services in more ways than one
Still I concealed her existence from the onlookers
Continuing to hide this clandestine relationship
Guilt played suspect images through my mind
But her coldness brought me back to reality
Holding her, touching her the way she desires
Excited me
Tasting her creamy flesh,
Aroused me
Causing sensations that made her melt in my hands
She was more than a fling, more than an addiction
An internal craving that had to be purged
But not today
The scent of praline filled my lips
As we shared a long cool kiss to consummate our union
Engulfed by the passion of the moment
Deceitfulness was revealed to the one
The one that legally binds
With selfish ownership
My Accomplice had no regrets
Even when my significant literally snatched
Her existence from my very hands
With my shame exposed, I have no choice but
To reveal my betrayal
Of my diabetic disease
For a container of Breyers Praline & Cream
Author notes
Yes I have an ice cream obsession
written 12/30/2005
In a list
A contest entry
- IS NO ONE UP FOR THIS CHALLENGE?? I WANT SOME SUGAR IN MY BOWL! MEN ONLY PLEASE! by cheaphotelsign.
400 points, ended August 15, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wanting Something You Cannot Have (or Never Had) by Chelsea Void.
600 points, ended September 2, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very clever! i liked the little twist at the end. brilliant
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Thank U it was fun
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This was very sensual to say the least
loved the way it melted as I read it
and the ending was just delicious.
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lol!! melted huh? Thanks. This was fun and it came out of no where.
~Mykeeee
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Very clever ~
Nice word play Mikeee ~
Great pic....would have made me nauseated in real life,
but on the monitor it aint too bad ~
hehe ~
Best of luck to you ~
Bear ~
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Nauseated? Unless you are lactose intolerant, You should be fine lol!! Thanks my new friend. Pic was a deception as an intelligent man like yourself would know.
Cheers!! ~ mykey
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lol that was good I really liked it I really thought it was someone cheating but n ot with ice cream very well done great job and thanks I really needed a laugh
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Thanks - It was fun 2 write
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The title gave me high hopes, but I was diappointed that the whole poem tells more than it shows, and the ending, well, I wasn't amused. Sorry.
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Ok, now that was good. Only because at first I felt very uncomfortable reading it, and I wasn't sure if I wanted to go on. But at the end, I just ended up laughing hysterically. Very good flow. Awesome emotional response range. I felt everything from discomfort, to humor, to shame. Pretty interesting!
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i LOVE it
U know this is one of the best comments I have read about this one. Why U ask? Because you caught everything I wanted the reader to feel. The ultimate thought was humor but I had to use the trick of illusion to bring everyone through the piece. Thank U so much!!!
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Umm Ice Cream Dreams
Damm! you had me going for a minute, and this affair with my fave flavor. You have just done a beautiful pen here. excellent read, and yet its erotic and with humor too........novy
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My favorite as well. The lactose intolerant is sneaking up on me so its a once a month thing. I enjoyed this one a lot so thank U 4 loving it ~ Mikey
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Interesting.
Haha, and it was cute, too.
I know what it's like to have diabetics in the family..
My Great Grandfather would ALWAYS sneak stuff because his sugar-free stuff tasted like crap.
LOL!
Anywho, good write. :]
Keep it up!
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LOL!! funny as hell I know. Thanks 4 relating.
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This was funny
I would say you've got it licked!
Good luck
onesugar
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LOL!! thanks - I wanted to throw the reader off and end it differently. Plenty people in my family are diabetic and they are ALWAYS sneaking and eating the wrong thing ~ mikEEEEEEEEE
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ha! too funny. thanks for entering and good lick- i mean luck in the contest
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((winks & waves))
Thanks ~ Had to convert my image but alls good ~ glad you enjoyed. My seductive pieces are already posted. Much hotter
~ MyKey
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