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You

My heart just skips a beat everytime you are near.

Fireworks bursting overhead.
That is what I hear each time we are together.

It was a mid summer's day when I met you in the park.

You are like a breath of fresh air to me.

Every time I walk to the park and sit
at that same old bench. I think of you.

I want our love to endure forever.
Not just a passage of time.

I see the birds up in the trees singing their songs.

That's what I want our love to be like a love ballard.

You sing to me. I sing to you.

How much more happier can life be?


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  • S Goli
    October 2, 2007

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    Great ! ! !

    You are an outstanding poet, I love all of your poetry they are fantastic. But I am pretty new to all this so could you please have a look at mine and tell what you think. Keep it up!

  • xXxDanielxXx
    August 1, 2007

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    brillent

    I read this poem and instantly feel good, the love and effection you have with this person is obviously very deep, dan xx


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    SO LOVELY !!!!!

    When the one who we gave our heart to leaves we keep going back to the one place where sweet memories of them lies.