Dear You
I have been living a lie.
When I said I would love you forever
That just meant a really long time
I have found another
So much more beautiful
And as you sit and cry
Cant get me off your mind
I hope you remember
That it was all your fault
We could still be together right now
But you ripped that away from your self
We could have been married this I do not doubt
So you might as well kill your self
You will never amount anyhow
So does it feel good
To know you ruined it all
And I know you will beg for me back
Thats what I expect
But regardless of the facts
I will pretend that you have a chance
Just to keep you begging
So it will hurt you more when you realize you lost
And as I drift through this life
Unapparently
You will never be by my side again
And yes I will send you little notes
But stamp them with me and her photo
Just to rub it in
And I will think of you at night
As far as you know
So when I tell her I love her
I will tell you I was thinking of your face
And you will smile full of hope
But I will always know
You will never amount to anything of worth
So to your knowledge
I will miss you with every breath I take
Sincerly Me
Its funny how what you did to me
Looks so good in writing
Author notes
I just got an idea...please critisize!!!!!!
Honesty is all I ask
Comments
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Oh my! It seems that someone perturbed you to the point of having to get the words on paper. This is an exceptional work here poet. I think the word; "yourself" is all in one, and not; "your self". Guess you told them. LOL GREAT! Isn't it wonderful to be a writer and release some deep felt feeling onto the page. LOL Loved This!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Heavy write
But do not despair. Your future is filled with wonderful words
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Wait, I'm confused. I though you were a girl. BUt in here you say when you tell her. *shrugs* Anyways this is a great poem Devin! Very angry-like too. Twp thumbs up!
I'll be watching over you...
Your Guardian Angel -
Uh-oh, whoever you have written this for is in for it. Broken hearts galore!!! Awesome poem though, I like the letter feel to it. Nicely done!!
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