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Between Life and Death

I run from the light,
and hide from the dark.
I have no home,
no bite and less bark.
Life wants to kill me,
Death wants to take me.
I'm stuck in this place,
what might my fate be?
Always hunted,
never the hunter.
Always a coward,
fear pulls me under.
I've lost all I love,
in self-pity I wallow.
I have nothing left,
I'm drowning in sorrow.
The sun brings me pain,
night brings more fear.
I will continue,
for all I hold dear.
Never will I quit,
Never will I fall.
In spite of the world,
I will survive all.
Pain has no meaning,
I will not be detered
Even in agony,
I'll utter no word.
My silence is solid,
'till the battle is won.
My end is nigh,
the chase is now done.
I will fight back,
the time is now come.
The steady beat of my heart
blends to a hum.
Between Life and Death,
I've run from this fight.
My vengence is now,
It ends tonight.

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  • ennovy silver member
    September 6, 2007

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    Wonderful rhyme pattern, and it read well..balanced to hold ones intrest...Thanks for entering my contest....novy

    "may your fangs forever be sharp"


  • Lord Dracon
    July 31, 2007

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    Excellent work my friend, take it from a Vampire lover, great job here. You brought out the true emotion of a vampire.