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Whats happened

I feel so alone trapped in this world,
no where to go,
what has happened to the girl that I once new,
she would get up and go out, have fun,
and now she stays in her bed not wanting to move,
crying till her eyes are sore there is no more tears to come,
heart beating so fast she can hardly breath,
what has happened, I do not know.


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  • hurtgurl
    August 30, 2008

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    wow this is how i truly feel at this moment in mhy lifesometimes it hurts so bad i cant even get out of bed anyways awesome write


  • my imaginary friend
    August 3, 2007
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    i love it! short and perfect! you are very talented fantastic work!


  • Olivias Violin
    July 31, 2007
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    I hope that you begin to heal soon.