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Ice Edging





Feathered fingers of ice edging

Trying
                  to close in my view;

Trying
              to closeout memories;

your summer heat has spurned.

A contest entry

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 1, 2007
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    An interesting take on this prompt. I liked this. ~Pam


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    July 31, 2007

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    I loved your interpretation of this prompt although the formatting was a little distracting. You have captured the distinct differences between poetry and prose. Peace, Liz


  • poetsruletheworld
    July 31, 2007
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    nicely written and I truly like the form of it, thank you for entering


  • kiwikrazi37
    July 31, 2007

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    This is awesome! I liked how you put trying, and then below that, what you're trying to do. It's a cool form. Nice work!