Jumped upon by a hidden man
Living in nirvana
Dancing in sand
I'll never see you
Except in ecstatic dreams
A contest entry
- Quickie...Gonna pay it forward by poetsruletheworld.
600 points, ended July 31, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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interesting...
an unexpected flight of fantasy
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nice write, although it strays from the prompt. still thanks for entering
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Thanks for the Honorable Mention ^_^
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The prompt wouldn't show up for me so I just wrote :-(
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This is so meaningful and interesting. And quite sad...because someone you like isn't real lol. good job
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