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Library Words

The library buzzes
with eager words
kissing my fingertips
and seizing my mind
as the world outside
reads without eyes.

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Commnet/critque!
peace to all ~flight

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    The world often reads without eyes, making it seem what they want it to seem.

    I would almost suggest taking the last two lines and adding them to the above. The piece is so short, that it just flows smoother.


    • flight
      July 31, 2007
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      Thanks, and yes I agree about the line break.
      peace to all ~flight