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A Snowy Delight

Icy
Clouds
with fluff
morphing into
balls, children
giggling in delight.
Laughter will surround,
schools closed all around,
snowy fun.

Author notes

I kind of tried to make it in the shape of a Christmas tree ☻

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  • Random Goldfish gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    OMG...it's a flippin' tree! That's awesome...I am so easily distracted. ^_^

    This is great little piece here.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    awww i can just imagine the scene and what a pretty scene it is. this was wonderful and descriptive. a great write well done


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    July 31, 2007

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    This shaping and background were excellent. This is snow at its most fun. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


  • poetsruletheworld
    July 31, 2007

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    Nicely written, and a bonus that the poem is shaped like a evergreen, well done, and thanks for entering.


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    July 31, 2007
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    but where are the lights?

    nice job

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