Fresh squeezed skyline
dribbles
tangy tangerine
on lemon wedge
moon-hung;
frosted glass horizon.
Sprinkled stars and
seeded
pomegranate planets
dis-a-pear.
Sunset swallowed
in
the milky way.
A contest entry
- closes soon by Melissa Gayle.
360 points, ended July 31, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hehehe, brilliant, "dis-a-pear", hehe, I love this, the imagery and words are superb, it has a real freshness about it,
well done,
Alex.
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yum
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oooh... this is incredbile...
I love the way that you have related food to the sky... very creative... certainly not one that would have occurred to me...
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I love this whole thing. You can not only taste it, but you can smell the words. Really excellent, one of my favorites by you.
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Thanks
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This is profoundly gorgeous. I'm at a loss for words. The images are soothing, the adjectives are exhilarating, everything is beautiful.
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