Come with me mortal girl
to a world so rich and wild
Where the arms of time do not reach.
Through tangled vines and gnarled trees.
Let the impish Faerie be your guide.
Take a step into the Faery Realm.
Join them in their nightly dance
Open your arms to secrets long hidden.
Into their world you are bidden.
Without a care leave the mortal world behind
The land of Rune calls to you there magic you will find.
Kiss the hand of the Faerie Queen
There are many things to be seen.
Come mortal girl
Dance the dance
Take a chance
Life is what you make it
Here in the Land of Rune.
Author notes
I do hope that you like it I revised a old poem of mine it really jump started my muse. Hope you like it My Queen.Hehe.
Or A Magickal Land Like Rune Or Elfwood....
Rune is the Land of Faeries, and Elfwood is the Land of Elvens....
Or a Song that about Faeires
A contest entry
- In a Mystic Dream Come away with me to the Waters and the Wild by Shadow Seraphim.
680 points, ended August 6, 2007, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Take Me Away by Dlvvanzor.
390 points, ended August 23, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is amazing.
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I read a book like this called "The Fairie Path." So I could really visualize this write perfectly. Amazing write.
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Wow this was great I loved this piece! Amazing!
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Oooh! I love this! But then, I'm quite partial to tales of the Fae and the Sidhe. *grins* Great write!
~ Kit -
Wow, this is really good. I love how you wrote it! Congrats on the bronze trophy! keep up your amazing work! I love this!
Crimson -
Definately fantasy. This fits really well into the contest, and it is written with skill.
Great job,
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It's cool, It reminds me of this book I read called "Tithe" Its about faeries, and your poem could definatley be in it
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Just beautiful, I could see the fairies dancing Just amazing
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Brava Brava!Thank you for entering it and it has a Brian Froud feel to it lol.... Good luck!
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