Oh God
you are the architect of a sublime globe
shaping the terra firma with baronial artfulness
sitting somewhere in the profound sky
magnetizing me to affiliate you
to assimilate your career
as I am the discernible titleholder of
the proprietorship of your work
when you are tempted to be my father...
Oh God...
A contest entry
- An AllPoetry Extravaganza-3 Month Gold and Silver Membership by Violet Moodswing.
3000 points, ended September 11, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderfully done. Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest
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Thank you for your entry into the Allpoetry Legacy contest. Your belief shines forth bright and clear. Best of luck in the contest.
Paul -
very worshipful piece .. thank you for your entry and good luck.
lisa -
A nice entry.
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You have done a great poem. It is really good. Thank you for your entry, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest
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This says to me, in an almost wondering way: "Oh God, of all of your 'sublime' creations, you name me...son"...this is a strong and uplifting write, Poet...I am glad you shared this one...Good luck with the contest...this is truly a Legacy worthy of a win, in my humble opinion. I love this image here of a child standing on the feet of the father...excellent picture for such a powerful write! Peace, Rhonda
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That is such a cute picture and simply and beautifully penned. In a way its touching. Good luck in the contest
take care.
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very nicely done, the more I read from you the more i wsih to read more..very profound and yet spiritual..
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A splendid poem once again. You have done a great job with words of power.....sitting somewhere in the profound sky
magnetizing me to affiliate you
Keep the ink flowing
poet
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