Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Is that my face I see?
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Do you worship me?
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
You point out all my flaws.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
You think you know it all.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I don't know how much more I can take.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I'm finally about to break.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Can you see the tears?
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I know you know my fears.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Why do you mimic me?
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
This is the way it must be.
Mirror, mirror you are no more...
Just broken shards of glass upon the floor.
Mirror, mirror, broken upon the floor,
I don't have to face your judgement anymore.
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Mirror, Mirror
A contest entry
- Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hey sissy i love ur poem keep it up ashy well yeah dont become a stranger come see me some time at mom and dad's house ok love ya
Jeffery Tyler -
ya that damn woman in the mirror always gives me evil looks..oh wait that;s me ha and my reflection. but truly we are our own wrost enemy and harshest judge. at least i am to me
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A really excellent piece that was a very well-crafted, personal and reflection on the 'Mirror, Mirror' prompt, and a pleasure to read. Best of luck in the contest.
David Michaels
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good
this is very good pumpkin face
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Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I don't know how much more I can take.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I'm finally about to break.
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Can you see the tears?
Mirror, mirror on the wall,
I know you know my fears.
i loved those lines, good job on this piece, it flowed well. i want to wish you the best of luck in this contest.
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