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age of un-beauty



this age of un-beauty stands to attention
in horizontal lines -

like that horizon, shivering in the sleep
of nightmare

&

approaching heat-haze;

[ where a mirage of an illusion
                 is still a ghost ]

.

each vacuum is colder
at its surface,

where heat exchange
calls goose-pimples
to raise themselves

from slumber

 

 

 

& we find fear

buried at those
crossroads,

with every superstition
once thought lost.


[ including new-age bogeymen
                    in turbans & italian

                        suits ]


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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    new age yes, frighteningly familiar, yes again,waking upo and they don't go away... so very well done here, a wonderful expression of genuine feelings...PK

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 31, 2007
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    Your ending was completely in your face, just excellent.