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When the dance is done...

The souls
are all silenced,
the lights have all dimmed,
and for a moment,
in reverence,
I breathe the night in.
No more shadows to worry,
the worries have gone
left alone with my memories,
and yet the music lives on.

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option three... The music lives on

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    this was a beautifal write mum
    and it was a wonderful take on the prompt
    you describe it beautifully and it was full of emotion and imagery
    i really enjoyed this
    well done and best of luck