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Earth's Legacy (triple triolet)

She, the creation of what we live
leaves a legacy to carry on.
The soul of earth is what she gives,
she, the creation of what we live.
What we know, will soon fade if
the gift she's given is soon gone.
She, the creation of what we live
leaves a legacy to carry on.

We'll share the burden of her pain,
as Mother Nature gently weeps.
To cleanse human-kind in her rain,
we'll share the burden of her pain.
Her footprints, upon our soul remain,
with a legacy we must keep.
We'll share the burden of her pain,
as Mother Nature gently weeps.

Her gift, we must each return,
for generations soon to be.
The torch of life, all should burn,
her gift, we must each return.
Her lesson of nature we learn,
and pass on, her great legacy.
Her gift, we must each return,
for generations soon to be.

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Triple triolet of the gift of Mother Nature and how if we don't wake up and pay attention, there won't be any left for future generations.

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  • Violet Moodswing gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Good strong points made that we could all take to heart. Thanks for your entry and best of luck in the contest.

  • MuddyKing Moderators member
    August 24, 2007
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  • kirbysman Moderators member
    August 22, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry into the Allpoetry Legacy contest. Very nicely written. I've never used this form myself but it looks fascinating and requires some craft. Best of luck in the contest.

    Paul

  • Cvillelisa
    August 21, 2007

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    Second Triple Triolet in the contest I've read.. Good luck to you in the Legacy contest.

    Lisa
  • Melissa Gayle
    August 2, 2007
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    Nicely done.

  • Hekate gold member
    August 2, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry, this is totally incredible. I enjoyed this loads. I wish you the best of luck in the contest

  • Random Goldfish gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    This poem speaks of something very important to me...and I'm just in love with the way it was written...

    Her gift, we muct each return...teeny typo there.

    I wish you much luck in the contest.
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    Here's a good luck bunny...her name is Cheza.

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