The littlest mermaid spied him on shore
Fell in love with him instantly
It was he who she adored
She fell for a dog
She thought he was a man
She tried to get close
But owner was always around
Finally she went and to confess her love
Got harpooned by the fisher man who own the dog
Now the littlest mermaid lives on
She has been stuff and mounted on the wall
Author notes
Hope you like this and have fun. maybe you will win gold next time around too
(option 5) the fairytale one I did the little mermaid
A contest entry
- THE BIGGEST OPTION CONTEST YOU WILL EVER SEE ][ im away for a whole week next week..so be kind and enter please..or ill hunt you down and stalk you][ by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
600 points, ended August 12, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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yay i was sure you would enter if i put a fairytale theme within it he he.
i loved this tale as i do all your others
it was twisted and far from the others
and the ending well...it was amazing
there seems to be hidden morals within all your writes
well done and best of luck
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thanks, and I didn't even know you had a contest til I stumbled onto.
I am glad you like them. have fun with the rest as well.
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OH I so love mermaids.... So this was sad for me.
Great rhythem and flow thought.
Good luck in the contest
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ooo, love your avatar. yeah this is for the little mermaid story. I love it.
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