And after setting so many times
in gold and melted burnished reds
and orange and tangerine and fuschia glow
The sun
rose for the lovers
and settled high overhead.
No shadow was cast
to throw the slightest pall
on each illumined color and shade and on glistening skin
this glorious day.
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Option 3
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colorful
Light and airy quite cute.
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eternal, thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it. It was a fun contest.
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this was beautifal and i could just image the sunsetting and rising.
it is one thing which can not be destroyed or harmed
this was a very vivd and colourful piece
and i really enjoyed reading it
a wonderful write thanks
and best of luck
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Char, thanks for the compliment, and for holding this intersting contest.
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your very welcome...keep writing
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Loved this
Yes indeed the sunsets and sunrises of this world is the only thing we havent messed up. So I breath them in daily
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