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Forgiven

broken
life at a total loss
token
of the awful dross


fallen
from heavenly places
again
is all hope cast in graces


flight
her wings are clipped
contrite
in His blood dipped


forgiven
for waywardness
driven
no more by stress


adopted
into His lineage
spread
your wings, not caged

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    this was a wonderful take on the picture and you really gave the picture a voice
    it was as if the picture had come alive.
    well done and best of luck