A soul so deep and full of fire
A heart of coldest ice
Wings light like the sun
But she is an evil angel
Howling wind tugs at her hair
Her eyes crease with laughter
Her silvery wings cast no shadow
For she is an evil angel
Her shaking hands hold a mirror
Remembering the rose they once gripped
Her past doesn't matter, forgotten
Now she is an evil angel
But there's a chance to go change
To become who she used to be
Open the door, stop the rain
No longer an evil angel
Author notes
Option 2. Word Bank. I used: soul, fire, heart, ice, light, sun, evil, angel, wind, eyes, shadow, hands, mirror, rose, forgotten, door, rain.
The idea behind this is that an angel went bad, but she can still remember who she used to be, and so there is a chance that she could become who she was once more.
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this was wonderful and i loved the repeat of evil angel
i loved the use of words that you used and how you twisted this
i thought this was beautifal
unfortunatly i think this happens to real people they go bad but can still remember the good bits of themselves
a wonderful write
well done and best of luck
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