When i am alone i think of all the things that have passed me by,
when i am asked a simple question i cant not reply,
for i have been through life on my own,
no one to tell me that every thing in life, will be OK,for i do fear the unknown,
i have soul so strong, built around nothing but high walls,
so when i am weak i shall not feel the fall,
i am person that does not know what i am my self,
i am not some one to be placed on a shelf,
sometimes i sit here and i can not feel,
time has passed me by yet this heart will not heal,
broken like a million pieces of glass,
yet my thoughts are still bald as brass,
i have felt hurt i have felt fear,
i have felt my self letting go,with one single tear,
i am here or am i not?
i sure have over the years lost such allot,
when does it stop were will it go?
will at the end i have anything to show?
for my wrongs a price i shall pay,
my last stop is my grave were i shall be gently placed to lay.
Please tell me what you think
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Deep poem with lots of emotion, I like it
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very sad
This piece brings water to the eyes. It is sad, lonely and full of pain. I sense aloneness and shame. It leaves little hope. -
wow...u really know how to put ur words to powerful use. I am not sure how to feel. I mean its such an amazing poem but sad! Very Nice Write! I LOVE IT!!!
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thank you very much....im glad you enjoyed it just as much as i enjoyed writing it.
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Wow these words are so emotionally deep, very open sad yet full of strength, choices hope understanding of knowing what you want, showing you will not back down, secure in how you feel, via the high walls, not letting the cracks show, if there are any to show.
You have written what your foresee as a tapestry detailing life as you know it, a powerful poem speaking volumes, showing much hiding little, yet showing a passion of choice both good or bad and understanding of what is could be or maybes.
I hope my comments dont offend if they do let me know, I only write how the poem makes me feel.
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