Stainless tears

Tears of anger and lust
stream down your delicate face

Always being the last one
to be treated with sane kindness

Slowly waiting for time to pass
sorrow gripping your heart

All the pain and anger
vanishes right inside you

Waiting for the right moment
to capture a innocent soul

Hiding all tears from my eyes
just to bring out your fake smile

Love comes into your heart again
stronger with each step

Right beside you my tears
seem like an illusion

Stainless tear drops flow with love

A contest entry

Pic Inspirations and Other ~13 on down~ by whatever girl. 300 points, ended August 6, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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XxrockxXxgirlxX
November 2, 2007
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I love this poem!

"Stainless tear drops flow with love"

that was definitely my favorite part. It for some reason made me thing of bronze tears on a statue but that's just me XD
XxrockxXxgirlxX
November 2, 2007

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I love this poem!

"Stainless tear drops flow with love"

that was definitely my favorite part. It for some reason made me thing of bronze tears on a statue but that's just me XD
foxmagic
August 2, 2007

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too too good!!!
love these lines
Always being the last one
to be treated with sane kindness
much luck in the contest
whatever girl
August 2, 2007

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this poem is so good
i like the first two lines the best
but this one part
you were saying your the whole time but then right here you say my which kinda doesn't make sense
"Hiding all tears from my eyes"
but other than that terrific poem
kiwikrazi37
July 31, 2007

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Wow this is beautiful Awesome title, and even better words to carry it! Hard to believe a 12 year old wrote this. Good luck in the contest! But with the looks of this, I don't think you'll be needing it!