So baby doll,
as I tuck you in tonight
don't regret your life
or the things that are important to you.
Mommies going for a trip,
she'll be back soon enough.
But don't worry for you can see me
when you close your eyes.
Baby, don't cry.
Your pretty little face
will always be in mommies heart
while I am gone.
Daddy will take care of you
and he will teach you to be strong.
While I am gone in heaven,
take care of your brother for me.
Show him the love I have given you
and let him know,
when he is old enough-
that mommy will love him always.
Just like you, baby doll.
A contest entry
- Childhood? by Restless and True.
370 points, ended November 8, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - L.O.V.E!!!! by Condemd RyeZing.
555 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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There's a very sad tone to this. It's great, but quite sad. Nice job. Thanks for entering.
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This was very very sad and definatley a different take on the prompt.
Amazing and thank you so much for entering.
~Restless and True~
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Wicked Sad
A sad sound to this poem. Very well written I may add.
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