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My Passion

My Passion

I want to hold you in my arms
Make your body mine
Take you to the realms of ecstasy
Make sweet love divine

I want to hide in our secret place
Love and passion fill the air
Explore your body with my lips
Love like ours is truly rare

I want to be held in your arms so tight
And shower you with kisses
Safe and relaxed we cuddle all night
And whisper heartfelt wishes

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  • Phed
    October 23, 2007

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    Didn't comment on this before out of disagreement of the subject matter. Well written. Erotica has always been you forte I like how this is subtly sexy but not in your face .


  • azlyn gold member
    October 16, 2007
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    Wonderful words of love and passion1 Lovely indeed1

    Blessings~
    Az


    • -Ang-
      October 17, 2007
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      thank you for your comment it is greatly appreciated.

      ang


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 31, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!

    Stunning writing Ang, brilliant flow and the rhyme is wonderful. Imagery is superb too. Very very romantic. This is somewhat different for you Ang, but it is a beautiful piece of writing all the same.

    Hey stay cool, Ang. Sorry I have not kept in touch lately, it is just that I have been so busy with my stories and things. But you are in my thoughts a lot.

    Take care lil sis.

    All the best
    Wayne
    x

    • -Ang-
      August 1, 2007
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      thank you my dearest brother your comments are always looked forward to. When i wrote this i was feeling more loving rather than erotic

      ang

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