Is it just a dream
To think of what we could be
Is it just a dream
To think you could ever love me
My dreams are big
But are they out of reach
I know you care
But do you love me?
Is it just a dream
Am i just wishing on a star
Will this dream turn bad and come to an end
Like they all have so far?
Not all fary tals have good endings you see
So is my happy ending just a dream out of reach?
Will my feelings be returned
Or will i just be left here alone and burned?
So im wishing on that star
That all my dreams come true
That maybe I will give enough
And my happy ending for once will come true...
A contest entry
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525 points, ended August 14, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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This is a good write. It was very sweet, but then it wasn't. But thats what makes it even better. Great poem.
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A saddening poem but theres a hint of optimism and hope in the almost innocent dispair which does help the mood a bit. I don't like being nasty but try and keep the rhymes more consistent, they tend to shuffle or not rhyme at all. God i sound like a nasty person, im soz i only mean to be nice!
cept that great write, very heartfelt!
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aww..this is sweet, and sad at the same time. I like the contrast on how you wish it to be, and how it is. Good job
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