Your love is sweeter then honey
your eyes shine briter then the stars
you are perfect in every way
Darling I never want you to go away
to gether we shall stay
as a modle to all
what true love is all about
My darling sweet
tonight we shall meet
and together we shall stay
until the break of day
I say to you "I love you my beautiful Rose"
and you say to me "and I love you my handsome Tiger"
we lay under the stars for hours on end
and prey that this night will last forever
as we kiss so tenderly a new star is born
as a sign of our love
and a bond that will last forever
so hear I say
to you my love
that I want to spend the rest of my life with the most beautiful woman in the world
minutes go by as I wait for your answer
an hour passes and still not a word
then a smile that pierces the sky
and three words that made my heart skip a beat
"Yes my Love" she says to me
I knew it must be
and she puts her head on my chest
and stairs in my eyes
"forever and always" she said to me
but alas the break of day is at hand
and we must part ways
until the end of the day
One last kiss she gives
until the next time that we meet
She is my Love
My one and my all
she is perfect
Author notes
A friend asked me to write a love poem and here it is... by far not my best work but I did my best
Well what do you think???
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Hehe I liked it in a way, as Synthetic-Nightmare said "i was waiting for something disturbing to happen" and of course I went right to trying to figure it out and when it didn't I still had the feeling of something off, maybe it's only me though, can't let anything remain nice and happy, it all has to be twisted and have a hidden, disturbing meanings that it was never meant to have.
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haha
no surprisingly enough I didn't put any hidden meaning into it...but you can count on my next poem to be a bit more interesting
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WOW FUZZ! It is much different, haha.
Wow........it kinda........reminds me of something. Haha, though don't ask. I couldnt tell ya. BUt.....something. ANYway, you've definitely got a talent. FOr some reason, my mind kept wanting to twist and fuck this up!! haha, everytime i'd hit another paragraph, i was waiting for something disturbing to happe. lol.
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Darling I love it
It made me smile so much! It totally made up for every tear I shed yesterday...
hehe I think you did a great job... I can tell the passion.. aww it makes me happy....
Why don't you write like this more often? Your very good... This topic..you did well with it...
Can you venture off into other topics every now and then?
it was beautiful...
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