I'm tired of lies
And make believe words
I'm tired of speaking
And not being heard
I'm tired of loving
With no return
Hope, luck, dreams
Fucking absurd
I'm tired of fumbling
For something to say
And all the time watching
As you walk away
I'm tired of fighting
For just one more day
To watch you to feel you
To push you away.
Please tell me what you think
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This thing won't let me applaud without writing a comment in this box. I have a headache and don't really feel like trying to critique anything or make suggestions right now, wish I could just applaud, but oh well...I'm just going to babble for a while, then copy and paste this comment into the comment boxes on the other poems of yours I want to applaud. You know I think your poems are awesome, anyway. So, blah, blah, rhythm, blah, rhyme scheme, blahdey blah, imagery. LOL. Kick ass poem
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