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[ So alone ]

So alone
Deep inside myself I'm crying
I'm screaming and no one can hear
But who would listen if they could anyway?

Sometimes I feel I'm breaking
Sometimes I'm not sure I'm whole
Sometimes I realise I'm cold
But who's gonna warm me now
I'm too broken to be fixed

So take a deep breath
Catch your breath before it slips away
Hold onto it, treasure it
People will take it from you if they can
The worlds cruel
It'll destroy you if you fall

So you're walking with your head down
What is it your thinking?
That if you get far away enough
You'll leave everything else behind
But it follows you
A haunting shadow

You can't leave the past
Not if you're scared of the future
Are you scared?
To be alone?
To feel?
To hurt?
Aren't we all dying a little inside?

The rain starts falling
Now no one can see you cry
Not that they looked before
It's starting to hurt inside
The broken pieces scar your skin

So drown in all your sorrow
Let it wash the pain away
There is no other escape
You're alone
You're hurt
And no one will save you this time...
But... who would want to anyway?

Author notes

eehh...im havena shitty day... poeple just dont understand shit and it sucks when you think you can tlak to someone about stuff and they just throw shit in your face like the rest of the fucken world....im tired of thinking my brain feels like its going to explode....i just wish there was one person out there that i could tlake to that wouldnt bring me down that would understand me and give me the answers... but its not that easy.........

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 31, 2007

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    Aww I am sorry you have had a bad day!! But hey you never know tommorow could be the best day of your life!! You never know!! Soo i like your poetry it has lots of emotion and it makes me feel what you feel well kinda!! But hey we all have bad days and we all have good days but its the greats day that are rare so we need to treasure them!! Well keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!!! Jess