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Serendiptiy

Her limbs flailing
inviting me in
when she twists her legs
and flips her hair.
wanton whispers float like incense
caressing the air.

Her eyes,
topaz stars forming delicate speckled
gold rims of lust thrashing
energy
into mine.

Her hair
is hay
but much softer
as I run my freshly manicured hands
around and around
allowing the curls to fall
in spiraling sedation.
Tickling my muse
and
throbbing my loins
which I didn't know could beat so wildly
until I met
her.

I set her gently on the sheets
as if a new born she is fragile
to be taken great care and responsibility of.
I lick her smoothly just barely allowing
my lips to touch the most delectable parts.
For fear,
no cowardice
that I might be too weak
to sustain temptation
on the verge of velvet
explosion peaking momentarily as I touch
the pinnacle of her breast.

Fastening a charm upon her
with my weight baring down on her.
A pure insatiable appetite
ravishing her
until precipitation
peaks and dries.

I summon strength
to finish the job I am not worthy of
with a roja blush permeated to my cheeks
like that of crushed and mutilated rose petals.
I pluck a star hiding in a bush
and make a bouquet of shimmering satin
all that is fit for the root of my passion.
Priming herself on my bed.

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  • lesbian-in-love
    September 12, 2007

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    Wow I find myself blushing as I read this and I am in school. Good write my friend. I love the fact of lesbian love since well I am one. This has very good imagery I enjoyed the read. Thanks for entering the contest.


  • Sensual Sapphire
    July 31, 2007

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    Love and lust work in this so well. Both seem to consume you in long slow delicious bites. While not my normal cup of tea it is something that tempts and invites you to sample the flavors it offers. Beautiful.


  • Plastic Dreams
    July 31, 2007

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    Priming.


    I've become custom to no longer leaving huge in depth feedback recently. you have very talented writes. and sooner than later i will envelope myself in them.

    enjoyed


  • shysky
    July 30, 2007

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    Absolutely fantastic. These sort of things remind me about the freshness of love. That first blush that keeps you more often than not located in the bedroom and merely waiting for your bodies to rest so you can once again consume the flames of desire for each other within your own bodies. Thank you for entering my contest. Well done!