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New Moon Resurrection



Pull the chain chord, which detonates the light
Sup from our fountain and cup of delight
Revel in sinful moonlight


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My Prompt: Sinful resurrection

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    Nice,

    Congrates on the silver, I missed this one, but it looks like a good challange here. Wonderful choice of wording. Thanks for sharing, and be blessed!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Cerulean Sunrise
    July 31, 2007
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    Great take. Congrats!


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2007
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    This is soft and alluring. Beautiful imagery for so few words. Nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck Storm


  • delightfulmess gold member
    July 30, 2007

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    oooh lovely take on the prompt.
    Great Job

    delila


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 30, 2007
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    oh I likey much


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 30, 2007

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    Prompt:Sinful resurrection And because I am such an angel (don't even look at my horns!!!) I will give longer than 20 and not judge this until 12:30 EST.

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