"Stay." Her husky voice commands.
He leans back on his forearms, his beautiful masculine body tense as he reclines on the bed. The blindfold is tied over his eyes, its ribbons running down his sinewy back. There are no physical restraints keeping him in place, only the anticipation of pleasure with a heady mix of pain.
Running the tip of her riding crop over his flanks, up his chest, as she walks around him marveling at her prize. His lips part as it dips between his legs. He jerks back with a hiss of surprise.
"Do."
He moans, "You bitch." as the first crack strikes his upper thigh.
"Not."
Second crack tracks across his taunt abs.
"Move."
She places the crop under his chin and forces his head back; her mouth greedily shutting his. Raking her nails down his chest, she lovingly laps at the whelps , kissing them all better.
Moving over him, she sits on his belly. He can feel her creamy wet heat sliding down so his cock quivers against her sweet ass. She lays the crop down on the bed next to his hand as if daring him to reach for it. She rubs her breasts against his chest as her velvety tongue plays with his lips, kissing him deeply, welcoming his groans into her mouth.
She rocks against his hard body as her greedy tongue discovers a sensitive earlobe, delicately darting in and out with her motions.
He pants with need as her ass brushes against his hard cock again and again. She moans as heat flashes through her thighs and belly, making her want more.
This teasing torture has become a need clawing to get out. Reaching behind her, she grasps the base of his pulsing cock. Slowly she pushes her tight canal down, and further down his length.
"Damn, woman."
"Do not move." She moans in warning. Her hands slide down to his dewy belly as she rides him, pumping hard and harder as pleasure pushes its way inside her loins.
He grits his teeth with each rhythmic rise and fall of her gleaming body. His hands ball up into fists as the tension mounts. He aches to take control, pull off the blindfold and take control of her. Her cries vibrate within him. He can feel her convulsing around him for the third time when he snaps.
With a growl, he pulls off the blindfold, surprising her as he pins her down under him on the bed. His hips pound hard into her as she screams in her final orgasm. Her extremely tight body bursting about his. He shouts his release as he comes inside her.
Tears stream down both their cheeks as they look into each others eyes and just remain still for the longest time.
A contest entry
- Excite me....... BDSM by Mistress Rose.
850 points, ended August 21, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very good story you have here with a touch of BDSM, I like. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Wow. This was amazing!!!!!!So sexy. Clearly shows the love and trust these characters have for eachother. I love it!!!
Guin
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Love and trust are a must really. To go to the out limits of pleasure the heart has to be a focal point to.
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Love and trust are a must really. To go to the out limits of pleasure the heart has to be a focal point to.
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how is it you manage to tell just as much story as me in probably a quarter of the words? fabulous writing, very steamy. i loved this, was such a sweet story.
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You should enter the contest.
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no pre writes allowed. ill try for a new story tonight, if not, im hoping shell start another contest like it in the future.
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Write another part to Punishment. I don't think they are finished with that little slave by half.
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nice.....lol
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I guess the pain added to the lusty desires that was burning deep inside them. I'm not much on receiving pain, but BIG time on satisfying hot sexual and sensual desires. Good luck in the contest.
Ted E
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MMMMMoans so very good.
Now I have to go for a while.
I'll be back later some time or other.
Roses to you and a cool shower too.
Teresa
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LOL
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Holy Cow!!! This was sooooooooooooo HOT! It's humid here but that write just made me break out in an excited sweat even in the Air Conditioning. What a wonderful story...Best of luck to you in this contest...Scott
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Takes a bow.
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Told ya...LOL
And she has tons more even hotter than this one
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*lights a smoke*
*drowns a shot*
Holy smokes! This is absolutely hot and so damn sexy.
Cold
shower
needed
now!
For more than one reason
Ok, thanks Bel for the vivid overstimulation of my mind.
Best of luck in the contest, but I think luck needs you more than you need it.
Storm
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Very visual and enjoyable and now I am going out to buy a whip
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Sis you do know I love this right?
I do love when Miss Sid comes out to play
I think my favorite parts were when he was getting upset and calling her names......LOL I could just picture it all in my mind...............delicious indeed
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This is a wonderfully erotic piece. I loved how you put this together, with the Mistress in complete control right up until the end when the slave can no longer stand it and then ends up taking control over his Mistress.
Excellent job, good luck in the contest.
**Master Ktulu**
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Damnnnnnnnnn u know I wasn't going to take a bath but wait till tomorrow morning but ummmmmmm lmfao I think I might change my mind
lol good luck in the contest 
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Holy Shindig!!
Now is this HOT or what
-takes out squeegee-
What a story You have penned and OMG!!
The images are stunning and Magnificent!
You are sooooooooooooooo good at writing
tantilizing pieces to stir the muse in
a tizzy
Love this Sweet One!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
got to have a keepsake
Loved it
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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