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I Went for a Jog

I can feel the cool breeze on my skin.
As I take a late night jog.
All I can think about is your smile.
And how I think Ive found the one.

Every step brings me closer to the thought.
Of holding you close to me.
Kissing your soft and smooth lips.
I can tell this is meant to be.

The cool breeze touches my skins.
And its almost like the feel of your hand.
Goosebumps begin to cover my skin.
As the concrete I run on slowly turns into sand.

My feet begin to leave prints in the sand.
Just like you've left on my heart.
You're the closest to heaven than Ive ever been.
In my life you'll always play a part.

As I run down ever street I learn
That its like the future that unfolds everyday.
The ground starts to get a little ruff.
But like in our relationship I think it'll be okay.

I could run forever.
Like our love it could also run the same.
I'm never stopping to take a break.
Cause I might just get caught in the rain.

My feet still going as fast.
Just like these feelings that could never go wrong
I feel them ever step I take.
As I take my late night jog.

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  • magneticblue
    July 30, 2007

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    Wonderfull transitions! Comparing jogging to a relationship kept my attention, and the comparison between rain/hardships and footprints in sand/impact on your life was interesting. Good write.