My eyes they miss the sight of you.
They cry for the years they won't share with you.
My arms they miss holding you.
They ache as they long for the warmth of you.
My mind is always thinking of you.
My sleep always has dreams of you.
My heart it continues to ache for you.
It beats although it breaks for you.
My love will never die with you.
It'll live on forever in Heaven with you.
One day I will come to be with you.
Then I will share our precious Lord with you.
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To Daddy and Cayla, you are so missed.
Written September 4th, 2003
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This is a very powerful poem. Professing your love for your lost loved ones. Do always remember that one day you will be together again and you will share God with them. I think your religious nature is part of what makes your poetry so beautiful as you a beautiful person as well. I hope someday your heart will mend a little.
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Wow...The religious nature of your poetry still bothers me, but your talent is just too unbelievable to ignore. And so I'll just continue to ignore the religious references and add in my own silliness to the spaces
Can't get much better than my result 
This is so beautiful, your Dad and Cayla must have broken down in tears if they got to read that.
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Wow an excellent write so full of love and emotion.
One day we will share our loved ones with God.
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Oh I loved this poem it is so sad but has a sweet side great work cant wait to see more of your work Robin...aka SH
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beautiful and poignant
This is NOT as sycophantic reaction to your commet on my poem just now but....
I can see the Genesis of many readings between us. Why? well I will tell you here and now, you have used a line in this poem as i have done almost word from word, yes its a predictable rhyme we have used but it carries a burdon, a weight so heavy it makes us sink happily in to the pit of sadness:
My heart it aches for you.
It beats as it breaks for you.
I know myself and know when i wrote a similar rhyme to that i too wrote it in ahe apocalypse of my emotions. My heart ripped closer to breaking reading this and i do depression and heartbreak for the most part well.
Its so fulfilling reading your emptiness and i mean that with the utmost respect.
Loved this: bookmarked it.
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ANother excellent piece of work of love. A great tribute to those who are no longer with you. Many hours of tears with this poem. Thank you for your comments on my poem, A Romantic Dinner for Desire's Dream. Take care Rick
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bless you
Paying homage to your father is very commendable Sam. So sorry for your loss, I lost my wife almost six years ago and haven't gotten over it yet. I don't want to forget, I still love her so I look forward to joining her soon.
I look forward to comments from you, you are so kind and flattering. Trying to clean up my page today, I corraled and put together two collections that had been scattered all over the place. I believe you will enjoy, especially, "Mystique Brook:" which contains four volums written with children in mind. You might like "Dreams", which I am still adding to also. Great write Sam, thanks for sharing a part of your soul, jean. -
Thank you so much. It was through tears and with sobs that I have written many of my poems. IT helps, doesn't fix things; but it helps.
Sam
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Wow, How can you do that. I break down every time I try. Such nice thoughts! Very vivid! I would point out my favorite lines but I love them all.
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