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Gone

BLEED THE VEIN!
DROWN IN THE BLACK INSIDE!
AN EMPTY FLOW!
FALL ONTO ALL THAT WE'VE LOST!
TRY TO FORGET!
DENY ME ALL YOU WANT!
DIE ALONE!
SEE IF I CARE I WAS WRONG!

FEEL HOW COLD IT IS!
THE GROUND YOU'VE LAID ME ON!
NOW YOU FALL WITH ME!
THE LAST CHANCE IS GONE!

I CONCEDE!
BUT I'M STILL NOT BREATHING (ALIVE)!
BITTER EMBRACE!
THAT I STILL CAN'T ESCAPE FROM (OR HIDE)!
HIDE FROM THE LIGHT!
AND FREEZE IN THE DARKNESS (BELOW)!
FORGIVE ME!
FOR NOT LYING TO YOUR BACK (TO YOUR FACE)!

FEEL HOW COLD IT IS!
THE GROUND YOU'VE LAID ME ON!
NOW YOU FALL WITH ME!
THE LAST CHANCE IS GONE!

SEE IF I CARE AFTER WHAT YOU'VE DONE!
I'LL NEVER BEG FOR ANYONE!
SEE IF I CARE WHEN I'M ON MY KNEES!
I'LL NEVER FEEL WHEN YOU MAKE ME BLEED!

FEEL HOW COLD IT IS!
THE GROUND YOU'VE LAID ME ON!
NOW YOU FALL WITH ME!
THE LAST CHANCE IS GONE!

Author notes

Sorry about the CAPS LOCK ..... I typed this on an online notepad and all the characters were in CAPS LOCK when I copied it.

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  • Abv. 01101001
    July 30, 2007

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    This would be pretty nice in a song. or with writen music or whatever. would this be screamo? i like screamo. very much. (:


    • WhiteShadow
      July 30, 2007
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      Yes, there is music to it, and I wrote it to be screamo. But, my band will probably not play it because the singer can't do screamo . We are pretty good though. We are called Confession. If you want to take a listen, our MySpace is http://www.myspace.com/confessionrocks