~A Better Idea~
A thousand years later the council met again, it consisted of a Good Witch, a Bad Witch, a Lycan, a Vampire, an Angel, a Fallen Angel, and a Demon. They came together and decided that it was time that Life had an adversary; no one would treasure life if there was not something to fear. So they got together and set to work on making an opposite to life.
The Vampire and Demon agreed that it must be powerful enough to survive any type of attacks, possible an immortal. The Angels agreed in the fact that the being would have to have a soul and emotions. While the Lycan suggested that the being has no ties to humans, for they would surely corrupt the being. The witches nodded at these ideas and continued to make the being with different ingredients, potions, and spells.
After six months of hard work the council met again and the witches held up a rather small vile. They told the rest of the council that all that was left was to write the fine print and it would be done. They all agreed the Witches decided to make the message a curse as well: ‘A hollow heart of ice rests in a body of pure. Never get close enough to trust, for no one will trust thy self near one so dark. Thy feelings will never corrupt butt make the being more whole. A hollow existence around those who will change and find love, while the being can not.'
Each council then dropped a single drop of their own blood into the vile, and then the witched dropped the note in... A great flash of light and a form appeared; a Woman.
White hair that makes silk jealous and eyes so dark in blue that the Sapphire gem hides in shame. The woman stood a long frame of 5'9 with no shoes on. She wore a black, form fitting, dress. She pulled on a silver cloak and closed it tightly shut with a silver clasp. The council nodded and decided to add one last thing to their creation.
“Music; that shall be your only outlet into which your emotions will truly show through. You shall be able to play any instrument you pick up, and that music will calm and almost hypnotize the listeners.” The council looked at her and she looked at them. She spoke, "You made me like this. My twin's adversary! You all are going to pay one day." and disappeared.
Death walked out of the council's room and disappeared, doomed to roam the Earth looking for one who would be able to bare trusting, and maybe loving the ultimate end, Death.
~Continueing is the only way~
Author notes
This is the second 'chapter' in my story. It is part of the 'book' I have been working on for more than five years.
Please tell me what you think
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Lionsloves Lair
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Wow, i would love to see the entire thing fleshed out, this is very captivating and creative. Well done.
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What a read! This is getting quite interesting! Cant wait to read more! Thanks for posting this in the lair. Keep them coming!

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Thanks. I am working really hard on part four right now. ^-^ Hope to have it out by october.
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A good story. Imaginative. Interesting premise. Well penned.
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