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Frayed Dandelion Heads


Frayed dandelion
Heads shift sadly in noon heat--
Breathy wisp remains

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  • Samplette gold member
    August 10, 2007

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    A very nicely written haiku. I think haiku is not supposed to capitalized. Other than that, a GREAT job. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam

    • micol gold member
      August 10, 2007
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      Some haiku should not be capitalized; others demand it. For whatever reason, this one did. Thanks for the compliment and for the contest. It was enjoyable to write for it.

      • Samplette gold member
        August 11, 2007
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        This is something I did not know. This was one of the best I have read in a long time. Very well done. Sorry I didn't know what I was talking about here. My bad.