some say blue
others, green
clear,
or gray
but water is its own color
eliminating mother and father,
and it slid over us
colliding
twisting
his dark skin
with
my trembling,
pale.
Author notes
... short one.
just thinking colors and to each their own.
[[people see things differently.]]
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A contest entry
- The Ocean by aliceramone.
500 points, ended July 31, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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definitely. wow, very personal poem for you from what i read. beautiful babe.=]
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my little girl said that the clouds looked "washed" for a color the other day.
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I love the use of colors in this piece. I always love when people put color into their piece, I think it can really help with the tone. And the colors that you used for this piece really match that sort of peaceful yet melancholy tone and flow you have here. I love it.
lots of love
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Interesting. I liked how you used the colors in this. The imagery was very good. Wonderful piece and good luck.
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thank you-
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great job depicting colors in this great unique piece with immaculate imagery...well done...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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that was delictable.
i adore any poetry about the ocean & the simplicty of this was a natural beauty within itself.
sooooo hope you get something from this contest; you def deserve it sweets
<3
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thank you baby for the encouragement! =]]
how are you? <3
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