Little tainted whore house
Stands among the town
playing to mans perversion
spreading lust around
Little Prostitute Candy
puts on her Lingerie
her Fishnets and Stilettos
Her breasts protrude her red corset
Little fiendish customer
enters once again
asking for that slut named Candy
to replace his desire with a sin
Little jaded Candy
playes her little Candy whore role
trades him sex for money
but would not let him go
Little brothel bullet
enters through his head
and little sinful Candy
kicks him off the bed.
Author notes
"I Won't Let This Build Up Inside Of Me"
##4 -- Lust --
#1 Brothel Bullets ~~** MAJOR BROWNIE POINTS**~~
#2 -- Word Bank --
-- Prostitute
Sex
Slut
Whore
Lingerie
Corset
Fishnets
Stilettos
Perversion
Desire
A contest entry
- ~*The Seven Deadly Sins*~ by Whisper Trinity.
600 points, ended August 1, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Here's to the liars" by Heartbeatsxfading.
300 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really liked this, but I wsh you could have kept on with the rhyming. The flow was good, but could use some improvement.
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OoOoh wow!!!
this is like amazing
xx
loving the last stanza!
sooo wasnt expecting that
great write dolly
xx
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THANK YOU SO MUCH! I was really hoping someone would do this title it is my favorite one hence the MAJOR BROWNIE POINTS lol This was a fucking awesome poem! I love the use of the words. Its not too rhymey but it has meaning. This is definately an INSTANT FAVORITE! This will definately excel in this contest! Good Luck and Tremendous Write! Blessed Be!
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