God blessed us with it
With Legacy
Like the soldiers who die
To give us freedom,
Never do die
Legacy is the thing that lives
It breathes in each of us
Everyone's story is in life
We carry ourselves with pride
But some remember
We are held by Legacy
Hold your flag high,
And your head
Legacy goes on and on
But where will it end
No one knows
For it keeps going on
You and I are it
Legacy is everything from you
To a flower to the sun
Just remember it
Because it made us free
Author notes
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A contest entry
- An AllPoetry Extravaganza-3 Month Gold and Silver Membership by Violet Moodswing.
3000 points, ended September 11, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Many points to ponder in your write. I like a poem that offers food for thought. Best of luck in the contest.
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God's blessings truly are our legacy. Heroic efforts of the soldier's life "never do die". A well written
train of thought upon the pages of poetry. A good poem. Best wishes in the contest and many blessings to you.
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Thank you for your entry into the Allpoetry Legacy contest. Your words ring of strongly held beliefs. Good job on that.
Paul -
"Like the soldiers who die
To give us freedom,
Never do die"
My favorite lines, a brilliant statement. I love how strong and deep this poem is, a wonderful take on the prompt. -
You wrote your legacy, thank you for the entry.
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Thank you for your entry in this contest. Your words ring loud and very true. Thank you, and I wish you the best of luck
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You seem confident of you words and I respect that. Thank you for your entry into the Legacy contest.
Lisa -
Interesting take on the prompt, feelings of the legacy of freedom given to us by others who give up their own so we may enjoy it. Nice write. Love, C
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