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Come out (Of the rain)

Aren't you tired of the stormy weather

hey (hey)
come get out of the rain

hey (hey)
come get out of the rain


Footsteps fall like thunder
Their rage apparent to a frightened mother
who should stop holding on
to what's already gone


hey (hey)
come get out of the rain (out of the rain)


A glass window shatters
frightened her children scatter
comming to hide behind their mother

Aren't you tired of the stormy weather
many times we have offered
but now it might be too late

who will hear you
over the hail and the rain


Aren't you tired of the stormy weather

hey (hey)
come get out of the rain

hey (hey)
come get out of the rain


Aren't you tired of the weather...


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JadalaStar

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  • your angers a gift
    August 19, 2007

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    haha...I love the irish Hey (hey) thing...not sure if thats actually irish but whatever...this was a really fun song you wrote here...very light hearted and yeah...just fun...I enjoyed reading it...although right now I wish it would rain a little more...but eh...one persons crap is another mans treasure


    • JadalaStar
      August 19, 2007
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      Thanks, man.

      I wonder if it IS irish...hmmm...

      Personaly, I love the rain- but it's not for everybody.


  • Redrum Requiem
    July 30, 2007

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    This is such an awesome song. Really. If you can sing, I suggest you record yourself singing this and send it to some companies. It's perfectly marketable, in a good way.
    Good luck!
    ♥ Emil


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    July 30, 2007

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    hay sweetie, i have not read this yet and i will not untill you put your ap name in the authors notes as i asked this is your warning, i will go back and read once you have dont this thanks sweet♥