All I wanted from the past.
Was to be with an open wing and a heart.
To stand by me with out a strain of mind.
I have always dreamed to be close to you.
Someone that I have cherished on and through.
You gave me love, you gave me light.
But something else took me away from you.
The miles and hours that I dream are all for you.
Your wing so gentle has the sun and the moon.
The heart you have so care free.
That is what I wanted all along.
Was to be close to you.
But that dream as slipped and went by so many times.
I cant find you now any way.
The only place is in my heart and soul.
My mind is feeling with our memories.
Hand in hand or just a plain old hug.
But I was with you and your undying love for me.
Yes its true, that my love for you is strong.
Probably, stronger then our love put together.
When I close my eyes I see you there.
With your smile that cute oh smile.
But the past is the past.
I hope that one day I will see you agin.
But as for now your in my memories.
A good place to be........
MY angel.
A contest entry
- Options:: Titles, Love and Heartbreak. Please join :) by I-Feel-weightless.
360 points, ended August 16, 2007, 69 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Procrastination Station by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended October 8, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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fabulos!
Excellent as usually....'mate' your such a great writer....you'll go far...your poems will make you famous...just remember us little people(like me)!!!
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This is a fab poem, not sure it fits this contest but beautifully written, well done and good luck!
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I could be wrong, but I'm thinking this is more like a love poem than it has to do with procrastination. I do understand maybe it's because you waited to act on love and perhaps there is where the procrastination lies. Please forgive me if I'm not getting the true meaning of the procrastination. If you can help me out I will be more than happy to see it from another angle then the one I'm looking at. I want to thank you for entering my "The Procrastination Station" contest.
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I love this!! Good luck in the contests!
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I love it... well done...
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thanks
thanks this poem is in a contest so I hope it wins somthing
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