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N.C.U.T.L.D.

To all of those
on this day of days,
please open your ears,
please hear what I say.

Today is the day
that no one can frown,
no one can be sad,
and no one let down.

This day is for you
to shelve all your dismay.
From all your friends to you,
it's National Cheer Up the Lonely Day!

Cheers!

A contest entry

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 10, 2007
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    WElcome to All Poetry

    Riftkin


    • Kyn
      August 10, 2007
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      Thank you dear for the welcome! =)


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 4, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Kyn

    Lovely write I enjoyed the second stanza very much

    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    ~Amanda


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    August 2, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    and thanks for entering. Such a happy write. Sure to cheer up anyone with a bad case of the doldrums. I think we all need to know that we aren't alone even when we think we are

    Best of luck in the contest.


  • getsbetter
    August 2, 2007
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    Welcome to Allpoetry! Thank you for entering the contest. I must agree with everyone else on this one, Great write and very uplifting. The flow of it is perfect, clean and easy to read (I think important) your really going to love this site. Good luck...GETS


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    August 1, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering!

    What a sweet and uplifting piece. It's nice to make the effort to try and make others happy, especially when they're sad and you're not.

    Thanks for entering and good lukc
    Faerie - Site Greeter


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    August 1, 2007

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    Thanks for entering

    This is a perky pick me up poem

    Great flow and wonderful message. The rhythm and rhyme scheme is also uplifting to the spirit.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    July 31, 2007

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    Thanks for entering

    Good job. This is definitely a good poem to cheer someone up. Good flow and structure. Nice rhyme.

    Good luck and welcome to allpoetry. I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy
    Site Greeter


  • FifthDove
    July 31, 2007

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    Thanks for the entry

    Aweeee, well it cheered me up, so I guess this poem really works Love the up-beat message and feel to this piece. Nicely done Thank you for the entry and welcome to the site

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