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Memories of Syrup

As a child we have sundaes,
In the heat of the summer,
Those were fun days.
Go to the dairy shack,
Spend all our money,
Not one cent we get back.

Strawberry, Chocolate, Pineapple syrups,
Such a sugar high when we get done,
Those were days we had sundae fun.

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  • knitonepearlone
    September 16, 2008

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    Oh yes this is a happy, sweet memory. I love the simplicity of this poem,reflecting the simplicity of chidhood. Many thanks for entering!

  • Namita
    September 7, 2007

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    Wonderful pen. Thanxx for entering and good luck to you.


    Luv,
    Candy


  • Merry Christmas
    August 11, 2007
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    This is a good poem. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • penman gold member
    July 31, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • kiwikrazi37
    July 31, 2007

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    Aww this is cute and bouncy It reminds me of going to the amusement park, and spending like $5 on a soda lol. Thanks for your entry

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