Sinuous fingers sauntering
tracing paths of pleasure
Searing lips slithering
tasting passion’s treasure
Voluptuous bodies blazing
engorged by our surrender
Thrusting pelvic paradise
splinters into splendor
Shattering volcanic vision
spewing rapture’s fire
Drifting back to earth
Love blessing our desire
Patricia Gibson-Little
September 3, 2003
Author notes
Well this is my idea of a romantic night. I hope you like it.
Written September 4th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- A Night for Two by rgrpaperboy.
250 points, ended September 16, 2003, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wonderful! 0 to 60 in 12 lines.
Each line is perfectly crafted.
The rising and falling into bliss.
Excellent!
Marcellus -
What a beautiful poem. Great job. Good luck in the contest. YOu did a great job in writing this poem. Take care Rick
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