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I sigh over the knee
of my jeans-
their ends frayed;
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raindrops
are swallowed in puddles
clung
to the concrete
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& I too
lie drowning
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In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/25/15 by Sweetangelgrace.
600 points, ended July 30, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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holy fuck me.
I've had this bookmarked... but only got around to it now. I knew by the title and the knowledge of who wrote it, that it'd be good. but you always exceed my already-high expectations.
you say more in your silences than almost everyone else can say in all their words combined
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I love the way you put this one together. Very vivid for a quickie. Nice job!
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Encore!!!
Nice piece of writing
Good luck in my contest!
~~GRACE~~ -
Great take on the prompt
Wonderful lines indeed.
Good luck to you in the contest
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Your prompt is:
Rainy Day Blues
Good luck in my contest!
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