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Confessions Of A Perfect Girlfriend;;

eyes shift glazing above raw sushi dates-





If she's  "just a girl,"
then I'm just an "experienced"
virgin.

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thought of it at work.
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  • They Say Shannon
    September 17, 2007

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    Wow.

    I really like this.

    It's so small and so sarcastic, [I love poetic sarcasm.]

    It's wonderful!

    It's just... Wow.

    Great job, darling. <3


  • DrunktankLullaby
    July 31, 2007
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    lmao.
    fantabulous.
    I hope you work this into a piece & if you do - let me know... pleeease.


  • FallingTwilight
    July 30, 2007

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    Interesting. Great job on this piece.

    FallenPoeticAngel