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2007's Vacation

We started out a Niagara Falls.
Then we went canoeing.
The first day we only had to portage twice.
Then the next we did it four times.
then we took the day off at Misty Lake.
We got a campsite that was the bomb yo!
Then we portaged 5 more times.
then we portaged once.
After all that, what I missed most was:
Flush tolits,
Allpoetry,
Friends,
and pets.
The End

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  • catz Moderators member
    August 4, 2007
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    Your vacation seems like a fun time for you and your family. I've never been to Niagara Falls but would love to visit there sometime.

    Yeah, we don't always appreciate those thing we take for granted... like flush toilets and pets, until we have to be without them for awhile.

    You did a good job with this piece

    Dee


  • BeautifullyxTragic
    August 2, 2007
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    Yay! Our vacation was fun, but it's jnot over yet. Sabba's coming tonight!


  • Miss Chievous
    July 31, 2007
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    I love it


  • kiwikrazi37
    July 31, 2007

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    Very fun and good write! I love vacations, too, but also miss the things back home That line, about flush toilets, was really funny Nice work, sounds fun!

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